Christina's feedback

First, thank you guys for these comments.

I'm so sorry that we hadn't prepare enough for this presentation because Sabina and I didn't have enough time to prepare it. And we didn't practice enough before the presentation so that we stared at the screen all the time and didn't have more eye contact with audience. We are so sorry about that.
In addition, we tried to search the depth of colors, but it was hard to find out why the color has different meaning from country to country. Therefore, we just pointed out what the color means in that country.
Moreover, we regretted that we didn't have the conclusion and reference. We were too nervous to tell these two important information.

In the end, we feel apologetic about the failure this time. We will prepare well for our presentation next time and have louder voice for you guys to listen more clear.

Sanine's feedback

Thank you for all comments.
Sorry for not well preparing for this important presentation.The voice has always be one of my problems, I'll try and do my best next time.
Because I'm too nervous to stand in front of people so I kept staring at the screen and didn't have eye contact with audience.
We will prepare earlier and well for the presentation next time and improve the errors we had made this time.

The followings are comments from the classmates & me. To present their comments precisely, I do not change any of their wordings. Please take the comments positively. J

Read the comments carefully. Some comments are contradictory; you should think about those comments more carefully to figure out the reasons. After reading thecomments, write down your feedback to the audience.

In terms of ways of delivery:
1. The voice is too small.
2. Don’t stare at the screen.
3. Both speaker just stare at screens, more eye contact will be good.
4. Would be better to have more eye contacts.
5. Try not to look at the screen all the time.
6. Don’t focus on PPT all the time. You can drop some ideas, or the elements might be too separated and detailed.

In terms of visual aids:
7. I like your PPT.
8. Your background color varies by the color you’re introducing. I like it.
9. The ppt could be more colorful because of the topic is about color.

In terms of content:
10. They give outline, which is helpful for the audience.
11. Too many introduce of words. Less explanation of why.
12. Broad enough, but they didn’t develop depth into each color.
13. The content is not deep enough.
14. No reference.
15. No conclusion.


Christina & Sabina

I. Definition of “Culture”
-The habits that a group of people create by living under the same environment for a long time.
II. Topic
- Colors cultures among different countries: Red, white, black, purple.

a. Rationale
- Colors differ from country to country. In different country, people have distinct habits of color in different situations.
b. Preview
-Color in different countries and situations can indicate many representations. Our group is going to introduce you the meaning of same color in different countries.

c. Significance
- As people travel to another country, they may join in some activities. According to the tradition of the country, people in different situation get used to wear different clothes of color. Therefore, people should in advance check the tradition before traveling to another country.